Audience feedback for second draft

I posted the video on to  and asked my followers to give me feedback on my video  and this is what they said. 

Andrew Bergen: Camera exposure is wrong, some shots are too dark and some too light. Screen of phone not visible in text message scene.

Ann Connolly: Fade-outs work effectively and make the shots flow together. Acting looks convincing because of the shifty movements and suspicious looks.

David Ung: Running shot work effectively and make the viewer feel like there looking through the eyes of the girl. Voices are clear and easily applicable.

John Ando: ‘Out Of The Unknown Productions’ should accompany the title slide. They should also be placed both at the start or both at the end. Actor looks confused in the last shot as to what he is meant to be saying and the actor doesn’t look natural. First chase shot goes on for far too long.

Patrick Mitchell: Talking scenes should have used a tighter camera angles to make the atmosphere tenser. The chase scene has too many background actors and makes the shot cluttered. Music works well to make the mood unsettling. Camera shakes a little at some points in the video.

Tyler Severance: Dialog is cheesy and is too to the point. The talking scenes should have lasted longer and given more information. Song doesn’t fit well in all the scenes. Could have added dramatic pauses in some shots to make the engage the audience more.