When people first saw my first draft this is the initial reaction:
- The music fit very well with the genre and helped to build tension
especially at the beginning
- The camera shots were used well along with the action taking place
- The titles fit in well with the genre and were placed well through the
opening sequence
- The shot in the middle in the woods seemed unrealistic because it seems
obvious that he is behind her
- The dialog is fuzzy and the background noise stops and starts.
- The reaction in the conversation seemed slow and it would be better if the
reply was straight after
From these comments I have decided to film some of it again to make it more realistic to the people watching and also to edit it so that the conversation flows better.
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