Initial audience feedback

When people first saw my first draft this is the initial reaction:

- The music fit very well with the genre and helped to build tension especially at the beginning
- The camera shots were used well along with the action taking place
- The titles fit in well with the genre and were placed well through the opening sequence
- The shot in the middle in the woods seemed unrealistic because it seems obvious that he is behind her
- The dialog is fuzzy and the background noise stops and starts.
- The reaction in the conversation seemed slow and it would be better if the reply was straight after

From these comments I have decided to film some of it again to make it more realistic to the people watching and also to edit it so that the conversation flows better.

First draft of opening sequence

This is the first draft for my opening sequence. It has been edited and I will use my audience feedback to make changes to the editing and film some things again if I need to.

Editing proof

This is the proof of editing. The first picture shows unlinking the sound from the rest of the video. The second picture shows how we put in the fade out effect into the music. And the third picture shows us using the razor tool to cut and split the video clips.